Dhong

by **MUNIZA** » Sun Oct 18, 2009 10:45 am

Assalam u Alaikum

Aik afsana hazir_e_kihdmat hay, apni aara say zaroor nawaziyayga.

by **Mahtab Qadr** » Wed Oct 21, 2009 9:35 pm

zamane ki dorangi aur dikhaawe ka khoob tajzia kya hai Muneza aap ne . tahreer ki kamyaabi yahi hai ke qari parhte huve apne aap ko kahani ka hissa samajne lage , bahut khoob likha hai
shukria
Mahtab

by **Nadir Sargiroh** » Thu Feb 04, 2010 12:21 pm

'
Insaan ki khud-garzi ko...
iss afsaane meN, munaasib jagah par munaasib alfaaz ke tawassut se baRee khoobsoorati ke saathh pesh kiya hai.
'
iss afsaane ko aapke "afsaanwai majmooey" ka hissa hona chaahiye.
'

by **MUNIZA** » Wed Jul 21, 2010 1:08 am

Assalamu Alaikum
Mahtab Sahib aap ki hosla afzayi Kay liyay bohat mamnoon hoon.Aap nay afsana
paRha aur pasand farmaya bohat shukria.

mukhlis
muniza

by **MUNIZA** » Wed Jul 21, 2010 1:14 am

Assalamu Alaikum

Nadir Sahib aap nay afsanay par apnay khiyalaat ka izhar farmaya, is hosla afzayi kay liyay bay had shukria.

mukhlis
muniza

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