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jamaa tafreeq zarb taqseem (+ - x . / . )

Postby Ismail ajaz » Thu Jul 15, 2010 11:36 am

jamaa tafreeq zarb taqseem (+ - x . / . )

ek nazar dekh idhar o rooTh ke jaane waale


taalib e duaa

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Re: jamaa tafreeq zarb taqseem (+ - x . / . )

Postby MUNIZA » Fri Jul 16, 2010 12:56 am

Assalamu Alaikum

Tahreer pasand aayi magar aik baat zaroor kahoongi kah mazmoon agar uloom ofanoon aur paishgoyi tak mahdood rahta to zayada munasib tha.

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Re: jamaa tafreeq zarb taqseem (+ - x . / . )

Postby Ismail ajaz » Sun Jul 18, 2010 7:25 am

MUNIZA wrote:Assalamu Alaikum

Tahreer pasand aayi magar aik baat zaroor kahoongi kah mazmoon agar uloom ofanoon aur paishgoyi tak mahdood rahta to zayada munasib tha.

wassalam
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MUNIZA SaaHebah

humaaree duaa hai keh Allah aap ko sadaa Khush rakhe salaamat rakhe,humeshah haNsta muskuraataa rakhe ,mazmoon aap ko pasand aayaa bohot sukriyah magar saath saath aap ne farmaayaa keh


mazmoon agar uloom ofanoon aur paishgoyi tak mahdood rahta to zayada munasib tha.


jee aSl meN maiN ne apne mazmoon ko jo unwaan diyaa hai uspar agar aap Ghaur kareN tow samajhne meN aasaanee ho gee keh maiN Khud se kisee cheez ke baare bilaa taHqeeq aKhaz kiye jaane waale Hisaab kitaab aur phir uspar manfee soch ko murattib kar ke phir use baRhaa chaRhaa kar apne irdgird taqseem karne ke baare meN mubtilaa maujoodah daur ko pesh karnaa chaahtaa hooN jo keh ek manfee paihloo hai kisee qaum ke zawaal pazeer hone kaa maiN ne jise mazmoon ke HiSSah e do'em meN pesh kiya hai jabkeh HiSSah awwal meN kisee qaum ke muCbat hone ke baare meN likkhaa hai magar choNkeh woh bhee Hudood se baahar nikal chukee thee tow uskaa woh muCbat amal bhee zawaalpazeer hee rahaa aur unkee barbaadee kaa pesh e khayemah Caabit huwaa,matlab kaihne kaa yeh hai keh ziyaadah hoshyaaree chaahe muCbat hee kyuN nah ho jab woh bhee qaabil e qubool naheeN tow woh hoshyaaree jo apne andar manfee paihloo ko liye saaree insaaniyat ko mut'aCCir kar rahee hai Allah ke haaN kaise qaabil e qubool ho gee

shaayad maiN apnee baat pooree taraH waaZeH naheeN karsakaa,ummeed hai keh abb aap mere is mazmoon ko manzar e aam par laane aur apnee baat ko raihtee insaaniyat tak pohNchaa kar unkee tawajjoh Haasil karne aur sochne par majboor karne se ittifaaq kareN gee

Allah aap ko Khush rakhe

duaa go

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Re: jamaa tafreeq zarb taqseem (+ - x . / . )

Postby Nadir Sargiroh » Sun Jul 18, 2010 10:00 am

'
Ismail Ejaz saheb'
shakhsiyat-saazi ke mauzooA par aapka mazmoon pasand aaya...
andaaz-e-bayaaN dilchsp hai.

'
raasta bhool gayaa, yaa meri manzil hai yahee
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Re: jamaa tafreeq zarb taqseem (+ - x . / . )

Postby Ismail ajaz » Thu Jul 22, 2010 7:50 am

Nadir Sargiroh wrote:Ismail Ejaz saheb'
shakhsiyat-saazi ke mauzooA par aapka mazmoon pasand aaya...
andaaz-e-bayaaN dilchsp hai.




moHtaram janaab Nadir Sargiroh SaaHeb

salaam aap ke Huzoor

janaab baRee inaayat hai aap kee,karan nawaazee ke liye shukrguzaar hooN

mamnoon

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