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moToN ka bachpan

Postby Nadir Sargiroh » Fri Mar 21, 2008 3:16 pm

chhoToN moToN ka bachpan
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Postby Mahtab Qadr » Fri Mar 21, 2008 8:27 pm

Nadir Khan sahib
Assalam alaikum wa rahma
bahut shugufta aur aap ke makhsoos andaaz mai aapne bahut kaam ki baat dostoN tak pahoNchai hai, shayed ye tareeqe kaar bahut kargar sabit hoga. inshaAllah
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Postby Kamil Baderuddin » Sat Mar 22, 2008 8:30 am

Wah Janab Aap ab Doctor bhi bangaye bahut khoob, wazan ki bataein ba wazan khe dalieN aapne.
bahut khoob
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Postby Nadir Sargiroh » Wed Mar 26, 2008 8:07 pm

Mahtab saheb

Bohat shukriya

Kamil Badruddinsaheb

Shukhriya

Abb tak Doctor-e-kaamil nahi banaa. :)
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Postby MUNIZA » Thu Mar 27, 2008 10:45 am

Bohat khoob
Nadir Sahib aapki yah tahreer kuch mukhtalif si hay, laikin achchi lagi.
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Postby Nadir Sargiroh » Thu Mar 27, 2008 1:04 pm

MUNIZA wrote:Bohat khoob
Nadir Sahib aapki yah tahreer kuch mukhtalif si hay, laikin achchi lagi.
miniza


Tehreer pasand karne ke liye shukriyaH.

Aapne kahaa ke ye tehreer mukh'talif si hai.

iss se kya muraad hai?.. wazaahat kar deN toa behtar hoga.
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Postby Shummu » Mon Mar 31, 2008 9:39 pm

wah bhai kya kehne...maze maze mein aapne to ek ahem masle ki taraf sab ka dhyaan mabzool karaya hai ...bahut khoob..aap ka shagufta andaaz poori tehreer mein numaayaan tha hamesha ki tarah...meri jaanib se daad pesh hai! :)

Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai

Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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Postby Nadir Sargiroh » Thu May 01, 2008 6:33 pm

Shukriya

Shumaila saheba
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Postby Anmol » Mon Jul 14, 2008 9:05 pm

Waah Nadir Bhaayi, bahut Khoob tehreer aur ehm paiGhaam hai.

share karne ka shukria!
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Postby faisaltufail » Tue Jul 15, 2008 9:41 am

Adaab

Nadir sahab Masha Allah kia hoob mizah nigari ka fun hai ap k pas PATRUS aur IBN-E-INSHA ki yad taza ho jati hai
Alllah ap k fun ko mazeed jala bakhshay

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Postby Nadir Sargiroh » Thu Jul 17, 2008 7:12 pm

Anmol wrote:Waah Nadir Bhaayi, bahut Khoob tehreer aur ehm paiGhaam hai.

share karne ka shukria!


Bohat shukriyah ANMOL bahen.
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Postby Nadir Sargiroh » Thu Jul 17, 2008 7:22 pm

faisaltufail wrote:Adaab

Nadir sahab Masha Allah kia hoob mizah nigari ka fun hai ap k pas PATRUS aur IBN-E-INSHA ki yad taza ho jati hai
Alllah ap k fun ko mazeed jala bakhshay

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Bohat shukriyah Faisal Tufail saheb.

Ye fun ALLAH ki den hai.

PATRUS aur IBN-e-INSHA ki yaad toa tabb taazaah hogi
ke jabb hum unheN bhula chuke hongey.
unki yaad kya... unki tehreereN bhee tazaah haiN.


Lekin hameN chaahiye ke humm kisee bhee naye qalamkar ke
saamne buland meenaar khaRey kar ke...uss ke liye uss meenar
ki baraabaree ka hadaf muqarrar na kareN.
usey apna qad nikaalne deN...apni alag peh'chaan banaane deN.


Hum aaj bhee naye shoaAraa meN Iqbaal aur Ghaalib talaash kar
rahey haiN.... iss rawish ko badalna hoga.
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Postby faisaltufail » Sat Jul 19, 2008 9:11 am

Adaab nadir sahab

aap nay mairay chund tootay phootay lafzoon ko apni aara key kabel samja main aap ka mamnoon hooN aur aap ki aara se mukam'mal itifaaq rakhta hooN.
magar yeh wazahat be karna chahoon ga keh patrus aur ibn-e-insha ke yad taza honay ka main nay aap jaisay sahab-e-muta^la shahas key liyee nahi kaha tha balkey apany jaisy logoon ke liyea jin ka adab parnay likhnay se bahoot kam wasta parta hai.
dusra main nay jin buland minaroon (patrus aur ibn-e-insha) ka zikar kiya un ko hamaisha apany samnay rakhna naye qalamkar ke liyah zaroori hi magar apnay kad ki kaswati samj kar nahi balkay in minaara-e-noor se rooshanee laynay ke liyah. kioun ke yeh ustadaan-e-fan sahab-e-taraz miza nigaar hain.

mairi kisi bat se ap ko ihtilaaf ho to mazarat chaahata hooN.

duaa go

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Postby Nadir Sargiroh » Sat Jul 19, 2008 9:39 am

Faisal Tufail saheb

mujhey aapki kisee bhee baat se ikh'telaaf nahiN...
maiN ne barsabeel-e-tazkirah woh baat kahee...
jis ki tehreek mujhey aapke jawaab ki ek satr se milee thhee.


Aapke tabsirey se toa meri haula af'zaa'ee huwee.

umooman internet par jawaabat likhne meN ikh'tesaar se kaam liya jaatahai.

koii bhee saarif( Internet user) apne jawaab meN do mukhtalif ta'assuraat ko joRney meN maAwin satr ka likhna zaroori nahiN samjhta.
isee liye ib'haam reh jaata hai.
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