Gumraah..............by Farhan

by **farhan** » Mon Mar 10, 2008 6:04 pm

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by **farhan** » Mon Mar 10, 2008 6:05 pm

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by **farhan** » Mon Mar 10, 2008 6:06 pm

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by **Wali Ilmi** » Mon May 12, 2008 4:41 pm

Janab Farhan Sahab Salam Alaik. Bhai aap bhi kamal ka likhte haiN. Bahut maza aya. Apna safar jaari rakheN.

Khair Andesh

Wali

by **Wali Ilmi** » Mon May 12, 2008 4:49 pm

Yeh posting Tanz o Mizah meN nahiN Nasri Adab forum meN honi chaahiye.

Wali

by **farhan** » Sun May 18, 2008 10:39 pm

Wali Ilmi wrote:Janab Farhan Sahab Salam Alaik. Bhai aap bhi kamal ka likhte haiN. Bahut maza aya. Apna safar jaari rakheN.

Khair Andesh

Wali

Janab Wali SaHib

Wa Aalaik....

tehreer ki pasandeedgi ka shukriya.

talib.e.dua

FarHan Aziiz

by **Nadir Sargiroh** » Mon May 19, 2008 9:58 am

Farhan saheb

Aapke paas kehney ke liye bohat kuchh hai.
Aapka mushaahida bhee Ameeq hai,
lekin zaroorat hai toa buss usey ek dilchasp paeraaye meN
pesh karne ki.

aap ne apni iss tehreer meN
bohat saare mauzooaat gadmad kar diye haiN.
ek hee mazmoon meN kaee kaee pighaamt dene ki koshish meN
aap apni tehreer par girift qaaem nahiN kar sake.

Yakaayak aap koi nayee baat shurooA kar detey haiN
aur Qaari paRhtey paRhtey ulajh jaata hai.
1) Iss mazmoon par nazr-e-saani ki zaroorat hai.
iss se yeh hoga ke aap unn satroN ko khaarij kar
deNgey jinka nafs-e-mazmoon se bai'yin taAlluq nazar nahiN aata.

2) IbaratoN ki naye sirey se tarteeb bhee shaayed mazmoon meN tasalsul aur rawaani paidah karne meN kaargar saabit ho.

3) Bain qausain kahey gaye taweel jumloN ko aap seedhe seedhe bhee keh sakte thhey.

Apne ahem nuqaat ko ek hee mazmoon meN is'temaal kar ke zaaya na kareN.
Agar likhtey likhtey koi nayee baat zahen meN aati hai toa usey ek alehedah mauzooA ke tahet ek naye mazmoon meN dhaala jaa sakta hai.

Gumraah..............by Farhan

Gumraah..............by Farhan

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