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Mazahiya Ghazal

Postby najeeb » Wed Jun 06, 2007 5:00 pm

Azeez Dosto Kaise haiN aap sab? MaiN bhi theek huN. Ek mazahiya kawash ke sath hazir ho raha huN. Mulaheza farmayeN aur apni raye se zaroor nawazeN.

Aapka Apna
Najju Bhai


Mazahiya Ghazal Bar Zameen e Ghalib

Par ragadta hai aur phudakta hai
Bol murghe tujhe huva kya hai ?

Phool jhadte haiN unke hoNtoN se
Deede phodungi ghoorta kya hai

Roz jhuk kar salaam karta hai
Esh haza? Yeh maajra kya hai?

Seena sandoq har azu bandoq
Munh se barood phoonkta kya hai?

Hai padosan ki naak par ghussa
Ghar meN mere yeh wawela kya hai

Tu pahalwaan hai to chal bahar
Ghar meN ghumsaan ki faza kya hai?

MaiN ne socha hai khoob socha hai
Zindagi ka ata pata kya hai

Nafsa nafsi ko chhod de Najju
Daal roti peh kheenchta kya hai


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Postby Mahtab Qadr » Fri Jun 08, 2007 12:36 am

khoob bahut achchee nigarish hai Najju bhai lage raho...;)
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Site Weeran Hai

Postby Wali Ilmi » Wed Mar 05, 2008 4:39 pm

Najju Bhai Salam Alaikum Aap site par nahiN aa rahe ho kya baat hai? Ham se koyee ghalti ho gayee ho to mu'aafi chaahte haiN. Aisa zulm mat karo. Apne kalam se hamko khudara mahroom na karo. Please.

Aap jaise qaabil logoN se to is chaman ki bahaar hai.
Aapka Dost

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Najju bhai zindabad

Postby nayeemjaved » Wed Mar 05, 2008 7:05 pm

Great Gazal..

Mizahiya gazal khoob hai...mizah to zahr e khnadaN hota hai..Khatey hi dil wo rooh ko shifa milti hai...

Acchi Gazaliya parody par mubarakbad Qubool farmayeeN.


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Postby Nadir Sargiroh » Wed Mar 05, 2008 11:28 pm

Najeeb saheb
Mazaa aa gyaa paRh kar.....

MaiN aapki ijaazat ke baghair...
aapki ghazal ka post-mortem karne jaa rahaa hooN.

Par ragadta hai aur phudakta hai
Bol murghe tujhe huva kya hai ?


Shaayed aaj ANDA dene ki thaan lee ho...
:)

Phool jhadte haiN unke hoNtoN se
Deede phodungi ghoorta kya hai

Jabb nazar ke teer phenKeNge toA..
palat kar deedoN par hee aayeNge.
:)

Roz jhuk kar salaam karta hai
Esh haza? Yeh maajra kya hai?

Aap ke ehteraam ke bojh se
Kamar kamaan ho gayee hai.


Seena sandooq har azu bandoq
Munh se barood phoonkta kya hai?

Mun'hasir karta hai iss par...
ke saamne kaun hai?


Hai padosan ki naak par ghussa
Ghar meN mere yeh wawela kya hai

Khair manaa'eeye... ke Naak ka ghussa ..
abhee..kaan ke neechey nahi aaya.
:food01:

Tu pahalwaan hai to chal bahar
Ghar meN ghumsaan ki faza kya hai?

baaher jaane se pehley
Ghar waaloN se ek baar mil leejiye.


MaiN ne socha hai khoob socha hai
Zindagi ka ata pata kya hai

Soch khatm ho jaati hai... insaan ka wajood khatm
ho jaata hai.... zindagi ka ataa pataa...nahi milta.
Dobaara sochiye... kaheeN ye... zindagi ki duplicate toA nahi..


Nafsa nafsi ko chhod de Najju
Daal roti peh kheenchta kya hai

Pet ki aag......... insaan ki soch ko..
usske sabr ko... usske jazba-e-eesaar ko...
usski bardaasht ko....jalaa kar raakh kar deti hai.


Allah hameN aazmaa'ish meN na daale...
AAMEEN.
Last edited by Nadir Sargiroh on Fri Mar 07, 2008 7:13 pm, edited 1 time in total.
raasta bhool gayaa, yaa meri manzil hai yahee
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najju bhai ko salam

Postby Kamil Baderuddin » Thu Mar 06, 2008 9:23 pm

:roll: :oops:
najju bhai mubarak bahut acha likhe naa!
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